Project ARK a splatoon fanfic REBOOT

[Zerul]

I wanted to reboot this for some time now since the original got lost somewhere along the line. if your intrested in reading the rebooted version just follow this link

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uHjWvGqwTwnBh0qgQCClUf4UDFW9H6Rv7JTcagpwnzo/edit?usp=sharing

be sure to tell me what you all think of this.

 

[Zerul]

Feel free to comment guys. ALSO keep in mind that already written parts are subject to change if i feel something wasn't established properly, pacing is off, ext.

 

[Dragonwolfie6]

Just asking, but can I put a suggestion that would fix a whole bunch of your mistakes? You know, to help your story be a bit more... How should I put this... Readable? It's already readable but there are a ton of mistakes... So...