Right Whale
Inkling Cadet
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Imo nec eos - Fanfiction
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Rustic
Inkling Commander
Quite like that. When I saw it was Ride, I was like *RP Spoilers* damn, now he's got a huge robot to back him up... Shame it didn't blow up...
Aside from some minor grammar errors. "and and", it's good! I would like to see the next chapter. *Sticks thumbs up* :)
Aside from some minor grammar errors. "and and", it's good! I would like to see the next chapter. *Sticks thumbs up* :)
Right Whale
Inkling Cadet
Thank you ^_^ Can you please point out where I put the two and's?
Rustic
Inkling Commander
Eh... I just realized I was seeing things. Sorry about that, I just re-read it and it looks good. It happens sometimes, I read something and my eyes alter it to something else. An example would be me auto-correcting redneck talk and grammar to normalized civil folk talking, freaked me out in English class a few times tbh.
Right Whale
Inkling Cadet
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