Fanfiction: Strange Girls

[ThatSquidYouKnow]

Really like this fan fiction so far. Keep up the good work! :)

 

[Right Whale]

Wow! Just found this fanfic from your other posts, this is amazing! I might even make my own.

 

[MissingNumbers]

So guys... I'm here to propose a question.

First of all, yes, Chapter 5 is still in development. It's actually going in a completely different direction than what I had up earlier. But anyway.

Looking back at what I wrote, I realize that I didn't have much going at all. Not much was described, only the bare basics were explained, and I feel as if I should have gone more in-depth. So here's my thought.

Would it be okay if I went back and extended the chapters I've written already? And if yes, should I just edit them in, or make new posts? I know it's not the same as reading a fresh new chapter, but I want to correct my mistakes.

 

[ThatSquidYouKnow]

I think it's okay as it is tbh.

 

[lonelyrollingsquid]

If you want to and it makes you more comfortable with your writing then I think you should. As for editing or making new posts, I think editing them would be fine.

 

[Aykorn]

Yup! You're the author, it's your choice! I think with how you've laid down the essentials and how you've probably thought about it more, editing it will make this super. Good.
If you need any help editing or a fresh pair of eyes >u> I'm a pretty decent editor? (I'll just put that there, maybe I can be useful, I've got less time these days.)

Also, keep us updated when you've made changes you'd like to present!

 

[mario123007]

So guys... I'm here to propose a question.

First of all, yes, Chapter 5 is still in development. It's actually going in a completely different direction than what I had up earlier. But anyway.

Looking back at what I wrote, I realize that I didn't have much going at all. Not much was described, only the bare basics were explained, and I feel as if I should have gone more in-depth. So here's my thought.

Would it be okay if I went back and extended the chapters I've written already? And if yes, should I just edit them in, or make new posts? I know it's not the same as reading a fresh new chapter, but I want to correct my mistakes.

I'm was hoping that you could have just continue. But as to looking a more better story, go ahead!

 

[azuhoshi]

I read all of the chapters you've written so far, and it's really good! :D Keep up the good work! If I had a little more confidence in my drawings, I would've asked for permission to draw them, but I think I've still got a lot to improve.

 

[Squidderp]

I like this!