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Inkling Cadet
@MacSmitty was the new one I posted good?
Oh my, that is pretty nice for me, that is.@MacSmitty was the new one I posted good?
Well thanksOh my, that is pretty nice for me, that is.
It's better than the last. Though I'd say ditch the shyness and ignoring others aspect. In the RP, the characters have to be social with each other.@MacSmitty was the new one I posted good?
That makes sense, but I kind of want that to be a part of how he interacts. But if I need to change it I willIt's better than the last. Though I'd say ditch the shyness and ignoring others aspect. In the RP, the characters have to be social with each other.
Oops. I forgot to put that they look to be about 16ish. She's just never said anything officially. Frankly, Callie and Marie are both supposed to be older than Agents 3 and 4 but they don't seem to be (except that Marie is a little bit taller than Agent 4 in game) so telling the ages of Inklings and Octolings is always hard (are all the Octolings basically child soldiers).'Well! @Agent Z
I'm afraid your character is not that suited for Zapfish Academy, as they wouldn't be able to be properly mesh together inside of the RP with the current students and such. It's primarily the fact your character is fairly hostile and aggressive, not to mention the age that isn't even mentioned as I infer an adult of some kind.
But, to be particular on my first point; your character sounds like they would basically be the delinquent that would get expelled in the first week. And like... it's just that they'd be very iffy in the RP.
Got it.T'is good now.
I don't see anything wrong with it, nice and to the point. So I suppose now the only thing for you to do now is to arrive at the class late.