This guide provides very little that cannot be gained just by playing on the stage a couple times.
I want to see more insight into patterns and advice -- the sprinkler locations and sniping points are a good start, but I also want to see things like -- what's the safest approach to the sniping points? Or, stuff like Splat Zones knowledge: for example, control of the center area tends to be critical for Splat Zones because it facilitates travel to either zone. (Which is extra important, because this map is one where I think it's hardest to sneak into the enemy Splat Zone.)