Zythefox
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Alright.. I'll make one ^-^
Alright.. I'll make one ^-^
Thanks ^^ She met Zyless at school when they were young and, yeah, he's the more confident one. Mostly, before participating in Turf Wars, she mostly hung out with friends and drew when at home. As for how she feels about other, it is a mixture of both. She's happy for the person, but also feels quite jealous, which she hides deep down.@TACarbuncle What a cutie! Love the character that loses the limelight. How did she meet Zyless and what's he or she like? Are they the confident foil to Viola's reserved attitude? What does Viola like to do besides Turf, because I'd assume her life was dominated by something else before that? How does she feel about everything doing better than her? Is she jealous? Or is she happy for them? Or both?
Well I won't be posting it soon unless your soon is 3 weeks later, I got chapters 1-3 on my comp. Which I am nowhere close by, BUT I got additional chapters in a notebook with me. Sorry about that but maybe I could complete part 1 while I'm separated from Splatoon. So that's pretty good and I could show Terence in action with his buddies, again sorry for the disappointment.@Rustic my ears perk up at fanfic
Liked Irrius's personality. What's Gale like? Is he as patient as Irrius and passed that on to her? Or is he more hotheaded and rawrawr? Wow, best descriptions. But what is he like? Further, how is she when she's angry? Explosive? Cold? Calculating? Passionate?Well, nothing much can really be said about Irrius' past. She grew up in a residental block, and, when she was four, met Gale Whintyr, who she sees as a big brother of sorts. She would play with him all the time before he turned fourteen, and, when he did, he would come back after every day and tell her all about it. They even played with the guns sometimes! And now she's fourteen, on her way to Inkopolis for the first time, and ready to build a team of her own, just like Gale's.
I'm assuming these characters are for your fanfic, so I'll ask questions with those in mind. How are Octolings treated in this canon? Just a question that popped up and I wanted to know.She was born with a vocal condition that made it extremely painful to attempt to make her vocals do anything other than growls and faint whispers, and even then she can only whisper about five or six words before it becomes too much. She grew up in a rural area far from the big city, but it was close enough to watch ink battles. When she turned fourteen, she left for the big city, and met Captain Cuttlefish after following him when he popped out from the sewer. She was then donned in her hero suit, and has been doing agent stuff since. (She's kept the blueprints to herself for now, until someone can tell her what she can do with them. Also, the missions are much more time-consuming and difficult than in-game, so she's only beaten Octostomp).
I'll either update this post or make a separate post for when Gale, Neon, Nell, Lilith, Yunina, Ulysses, Ina, Ana and Jack are done. Right now, it is 3:00am and I need sleep.
Thank you.@Right Whale Since you asked, I'll tell you what I think of him. Like most characters, I see him as a tool, in this case, a particularly powerful tool that can initiate conflict and resolve conflict. I see the possibility to grow as a character and inspire others in his growth. I see the ability to avoid social norms and follow a path this character sets for himself, which is a powerful tool in its own right.
That's what I think.
Aaahhh Oh this is super cool. I've totally seen the drawing of Iro on Miiverse! I guarantee it's somewhere in my Yeah's rn even.Name(s): Iro (pronounced as eye-row)
Since he's a beginner, he's gonna try and go through all of them to find the one that suits him the most. Of course, that means he'll suck hard first. But hey:Aaahhh Oh this is super cool. I've totally seen the drawing of Iro on Miiverse! I guarantee it's somewhere in my Yeah's rn even.
But no worries on going overboard with backstory. ah gawsh, the scientist, the artist and all the self-identity, that all hits home hard. You've obviously put some thought into this character.
So does this character have a weapon main, or does he just have this incredible free weapon stash from his parents?
I'll put in more later once I think of it. Just to answer a few questions@GBstep Love the character and the detail--I don't note it often, but think I imply it a lot, but I wish people put this much thought into characters all the time! ^u^
That said, there's always more room for development. We know what the father does... do you know what his mom does as far as research? What arts in particular does Iro find himself drawn to? Visual? Audible? Culinary? All of the above?
Does he have any close friends? People who look up to him? People who support his drive to be better? People who tell him to stop and smell the roses? Stuff like that?
Besides his first, does he have any turf wars that really stick in his memory?