theFIZZYnator
Inkling
Critique time.Now to take care of some of those words @theFIZZYnator suggested in his first post (the one on food)...
{gáfutu} - Container (derived), Pot, Pan
I'm the smallest fan of using the same word for container, pot, and pan, much less pot and pan. I suggest {nébe} for pot and {táme} for pan.
{kiné} - Fruit (shortening of 'ki néši' (lit. with seed))
Basically every plant has a seed, and seedless grapes are fruits too, so while I think the word is alright, the etymology isn't.
{táikaro} - Solid (state of matter), Rigidity, Hardness (derived)
{suitáro} - Liquid (state of matter), Flow (derived)
{tákiro} - Gas (state of matter), Inflation (of a balloon, of an economy, etc.) (derived)
I disagree with all the second meanings. They should be separate words with suffixes, constructed akin to, for example, "solidlikeness".
{ežáte} - To Stir-fry (combining 'to mix' and 'to fry')
I want a separate word for stir-frying because it's a very common way to cook something here in Japan but sadly not in the US. I suggest {étame}.
{bárate} - To Deep-fry (combining 'oil' and 'to fry')
Again, deep-frying seems just as deserving of a separate word. I suggest {ragái}.
{kédekoi} - To Dice (lit. to cube, see below) (derived)
I'll describe my dislike for the word for "cube" below.
{šéta} - Healthy
{žošéta} - Unwell, Unhealthy, Ill
I suggest having two pairs of adjectives like we do with the two senses of "to remember". {šeta} can be "healthy" as in "a healthy diet", whose opposite {žošéta} refers to greasy, starchy food, and the other word can be the opposite of "ill".
{takáo} - Face (shape)
{širá} - Edge (shortened to 'ši' when put after a number to make the name of a shape)
We're missing a word for "vertex" and "space".
{úši} - Circle (lit. one side)
One-sided polygons do not exist in Euclidian geometry, circles are thought to have infinitely many sides, not one, and circles are one of the most fundamental of shapes, so it more than deserves its own word. I suggest {ánoru}.
{déši} - Square (lit. four side)
That should mean "quadrilateral", judging from the etymology. I want a prefix meaning "regular" as in "regular polygon". I suggest {saidéši} for square.
We also need a word for rectangle.
{kéde} - Cube (lit. 'six four', as a cube has six faces and each side has four edges)
I am so opposed to this word you don't even know. Consider the Nintendo 64. Now consider the Nintendo GameCube. See the problem here?
I strongly advocate creating words for "n-hedron", "n-gonal prism", and "n-gonal pyramid".